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Hungry Posted 19 years ago
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Please help me out. I am quite confused.
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00 Could someone please do me a favor? I have an interview tomorrow, but I don’t know what kind of job it is for. The company is actually a computer learning center. They teach short courses. They can set me in any position according to my competence level. I am doing B.Sc. (Honors) in chemistry. I expect to complete it next year. I have done quite many computer courses and have some experience in helping people acquire computer skills. Now, I’ve got prepare a resume, but I don’t know my objective is supposed to be, since I don’t know what type of job the interview is for. I have written an objective statement. Could you please have a look at it and tell me if there are any grammar mistakes or inconsistencies, and if the objective fits the situation? 02 br
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00 Thanks in anticipation. 02 br
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01 b 01 u 00 Resume 02 u 02 b 02 br
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01 b 01 u 00 Objective 02 u 02 b 02 br
00 To obtain a secretarial/receptionist/teaching assistant position where I can use my computer and clerical skills to helping the center exceed its target. 00 0-
00 Could someone please do me a favor? I have an interview tomorrow, but I don’t know what kind of job it is for. The company is actually a computer learning center. They teach short courses. They can set me in any position according to my competence level. I am doing B.Sc. (Honors) in chemistry. I expect to complete it next year. I have done quite many computer courses and have some experience in helping people acquire computer skills. Now, I’ve got prepare a resume, but I don’t know my objective is supposed to be, since I don’t know what type of job the interview is for. I have written an objective statement. Could you please have a look at it and tell me if there are any grammar mistakes or inconsistencies, and if the objective fits the situation? 02 br
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00 Thanks in anticipation. 02 br
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01 b 01 u 00 Resume 02 u 02 b 02 br
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01 b 01 u 00 Objective 02 u 02 b 02 br
00 To obtain a secretarial/receptionist/teaching assistant position where I can use my computer and clerical skills to helping the center exceed its target. 00 0-
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0 To obtain a secretarial /receptionist/teaching assistant position, where I can use my computer and clerical skills to aid the center in exceeding its target. 0-
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0 I would suggest that you make your career a little more defined so that at least you appear to have a plan or a goal. That's what some interviewers look for in terms of attributes in the interviewees. 02 br
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00 Something like: To obtain/ acquire a computer teaching position where I can apply my computer knowledge and interpersonal skills. 0-
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00 Something like: To obtain/ acquire a computer teaching position where I can apply my computer knowledge and interpersonal skills. 0-
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0 Dear Goodman, 02 br
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00 It's so thoughtful of you for giving me a hand. 02 br
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00 I think I should simply state " 01 font 00 to obtain a position 02 font 00 ", and not qualify it. During the interview I can assess what they are looking for. What do you think? 02 br
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00 It's so thoughtful of you for giving me a hand. 02 br
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00 I think I should simply state " 01 font 00 to obtain a position 02 font 00 ", and not qualify it. During the interview I can assess what they are looking for. What do you think? 02 br
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0 By the way, what about " 01 font 00 To obtain a position where I can apply my computer knowlegde and interpersonal skills 02 font 01 font 00 01 del 00 to contribute to the Center's success. 02 del 00 "? 02 font 02 br
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01 i 00 I still feel the latter part is not necessary. Resume
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01 i 00 I still feel the latter part is not necessary. Resume
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