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Monugolu Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

please help me out and correct the sentence.........

hi, please look at the conversation:

"A: how did u feel while walking on the road?

B:it was good but sometimes i felt sleepy when i was in motion."

please correct it up and also look at at the grammer part .

thanks
  

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Hi Monugolu, Welcome to the Forum. It will sound more natural if you say it this way. A: How did you feel while you were walking along the road?

  • Hi Monugolu, Welcome to the Forum.
  • It will sound more natural if you say it this way.
  • A: How did you feel while you were walking along the road?
  • B: I felt fine, but sometimes I felt sleepy.
  • You don't need to say when i was in motion because we already know that you were walking.
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Hi Monugolu,

Welcome to the Forum.

It will sound more natural if you say it this way.

A: How did you feel while you were walking along the road?

B: I felt fine, but sometimes I felt sleepy.

You don't need to say when i was in motion because we already know that you we
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hi thanks for your prompt reply. yeah that is the best way to say like this but why did i ask such query as i wanted to make sure about the sentence "i was in motion"just i want to get clear whether this line is correct or not.i mean , can this line be used somewhere(alongwith any any sentence ) or there is something wrong in this line. please help me out once more.

thanks
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Hi again,

i wanted to make sure about the sentence "i was in motion"just i want to get clear whether this line is correct or not.i mean , can this line be used somewhere(alongwith any any sentence ) or there is something wrong in this line.

We usually talk about an object being in motion, like a ball.

For people, we usually say that they are
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thanks alot. now it is very clear.

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