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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Hi everybody,

my name is Ilja and i am studying as an Engineer. Can you read my translation an improve it? It would be very kind.

Due to the momentary environmentalpolitical situation and the desire for more efficient vehicles the Eco-trend continues. Alternative drive systems have not been developed yet, therefore it is valid to use the actual technology today as efficiently as possible. First steps which should leed to a more economical manner of driving, were onboard computers with integrated consumption gauges. These turn out ever more in disrepute to be inaccurate. The study's goal is to examine existing systems on its accuracy and recognize possible sources of error. Consumption gauges however offer no control of the driving fashion. With the introduction of Drivingassistancesystem the driver should be made attentive directly about a possible uneconomic manner of driving. The primary saving potentials are in the training of the driver. Exact consumption measurement in combination with modern Drivingassistancesystems can animate the driver to a consumption-favorable manner of driving. Therefore the car manufacturers try to integrate the driver into their consumption concept. In the study also new concepts are worked out, which may lead to further fuel and emission savings.

Thanks ILJA
  

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I don't know that much about cars. Anyway, I highlighted a few things for you to fix. Due to the momentary environmental political (wording) situation and the desire for more efficient vehicles , the Eco-trend continues.

  • I don't know that much about cars.
  • Anyway, I highlighted a few things for you to fix.
  • Due to the momentary environmental political (wording) situation and the desire for more efficient vehicles , the Eco-trend continues.
  • Alternative drive systems have not yet been developed yet ; therefore , it is important to use the current technology today as efficiently as possible.
  • ) to a more energy-efficient manner of driving , were (tense) onboard computers with integrated consumption gauges.
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I don't know that much about cars. Anyway, I highlighted a few things for you to fix.

Due to the momentary environmental political (wording) situation and the desire for more efficient vehicles, the Eco-trend continues. Alternative drive systems have not yet been developed yet; therefore, it is important to use the current technology

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