Please help me my friends..

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hi to all ... iam a student and i want to apply in uk to join university.. and i applied through UCAS ... they want from me a self statement and i have no idea about it at all ..i will be pleased if any of members helps me ...

littile bit about myself..

i stuided in uk for 3 years .. i did english foundation in birmingham.. sconed year i started my deploma in brighton.. third year in raf cosford.. my major is aircraft engineering avionics.. i have 360 points

do not let me dooooooooown ...

waiting for your replay friends ...

mr.alzaabi

Tanit · Accepted Answer

Hi Mralzaabi,

Welcome to the forums.
Have you had a look at the UCAS's website? You'll find a lot of suggestions there on how to write the statement you need.
They give advice on the following points:

Please read carefully what they write at the very end of that page (text in the quotation box below).

Make sure that your personal statement is your own work
We put all applications through similarity detection tests, which identify statements that have been copied from another source. Do not be tempted to copy another person's application materials, or download your personal statement from a website. There could be serious consequences to using other people's work. If any part of your personal statement appears to have been copied, we will inform all the universities and colleges to which you have applied. They will then take the action they consider to be appropriate. We will also contact you by email. Click on the similarity detection link to find out more.

Best of luck!

Mr.alzaabi · Answer

hi ... thankx my friend for your time ... i know what you mean exectely.. and as uyou said i read it all... but i need an example ... as you know even if i know English i will not be able to do in high standred... therefore i need an example... and for sure i know that copying another work is a crime..

waiting for your replay..

Tanit · Answer

Hi again,

There was something more than the warning in my previous post. Did you take a look at the pages I linked in it?
In that website you'll find a lot of very good suggestions on what to include (for instance, why you have chosen the course, how your current or previous studies relate to the course that you have chosen, why you want to go to university or college etc.).

If you follow closely those guidelines (which, in a way, provide you with a framework), you'll write a good statement provided that:
1. you write in a more careful way (mind your spelling, punctuation and capitalization - in your posts there are a lot of mistakes that could easily be avoided). You really NEED to give evidence that your English is up to their courses, and that you can cope with both classes and coursework;
2. you think seriously about the importance of your application for your future (for instance, how that course would benefit you, what type of skills do you have that make you a suitable candidate etc.) before writing the statement.

Good luck.

Tanit · Answer

By the way, here are some threads you might find useful.

Mr.alzaabi · Answer

hi ..

Think you my friend ... it is great ... once agine thank you very much for your help...

Please help me my friends..

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