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How can I make the below sentence sound more professional?

Flexible Working Hours is a policy that provides an opportunity for employees to work hours over the actual times they work their contracted hours. Employees may choose when they start and finish work within flexible bands at the beginning and end of each day agreed by the top management.

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Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

How can I make the below sentence sound more professional?

Flexible Working Hours is a policy that provides an opportunity for employees to work hours over the actual times they work their contracted hours. Employees may choose when they start and finish work within flexible bands at the beginning and end of each day agreed by the top management.

I suggest this.

The Flexible Working Hours policy offers employees the opportunity to choose their own start and finish times, while continuing to work the same number of hours each day. Employees may choose when they start and finish work within bands at the beginning and end of each day.

I would continue by offering a few examples.

eg Under the existing policy, Tom starts work at 9 am and finishes at 5 pm. Under the new policy, Tom can . . . .

You might want to mention what happens to lunch hours and break times.

Best wishes, Clive

Anonymous · Answer

Thank you very much Clive

it sounds much better, less confusing, and reader friendly.

Thanks again.

Anonymous · Answer

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