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Besides, the percentage of those who chose part time occupation, which accounted for 15%, was three times as much as those doing both part-time job and postgrad study.
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Besides, the percentage of those who chose part time occupation , which accounted for 15%, was three times as much as those doing both part-time job and postgrad study. It is much simpler to state it this way. Fifteen percent chose part-time work and 5% chose the combination of part-time work and postgraduate studies.
- Besides, the percentage of those who chose part time occupation , which accounted for 15%, was three times as much as those doing both part-time job and postgrad study.
- It is much simpler to state it this way.
- Fifteen percent chose part-time work and 5% chose the combination of part-time work and postgraduate studies.
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Besides, the percentage of those who chose part time occupation, which accounted for 15%, was three times as much as those doing both part-time job and postgrad study.
It is much simpler to state it this way.
Fifteen percent chose part-time work and 5% chose the combination of part-time wo
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