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Darsan Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
please help me in writing the content for website
HI,
The following content is written for ABOUT US
"SBI, is one of the leading (product) manufacturers in (Country).We have been successfully manufacturing and marketing (product) for more than two decades.
we started our company in 1982 with few employees. our high commitmence to work and quality have quickly made as a market leader with 350 stockists countrywide and employing more than 500 people directly and indirectly.
our (product)s are 100% handmade,they are individually tuned by the expertes to meet the highest brush standards.our expertise and innovative capabilities to manufacture (product) of any type and size, ensure internationally accepted quality standard.
Our mission statement is to become a multinatinal comapany with global presence in both manufacturing and marketing.our strngth lies in quality, innovation and
We conform to national labour regulations, environment protection, factory regulations and a value adding partnership to the customers.
we have a good relationship with our employees, defined by trust and shared rewards. We share our profit to motivate employees and share in the rewards of the companies success"
these are my words, but i am not satisified with the words i have used..if any changes can be made..please help me
The following content is written for ABOUT US
"SBI, is one of the leading (product) manufacturers in (Country).We have been successfully manufacturing and marketing (product) for more than two decades.
we started our company in 1982 with few employees. our high commitmence to work and quality have quickly made as a market leader with 350 stockists countrywide and employing more than 500 people directly and indirectly.
our (product)s are 100% handmade,they are individually tuned by the expertes to meet the highest brush standards.our expertise and innovative capabilities to manufacture (product) of any type and size, ensure internationally accepted quality standard.
Our mission statement is to become a multinatinal comapany with global presence in both manufacturing and marketing.our strngth lies in quality, innovation and
We conform to national labour regulations, environment protection, factory regulations and a value adding partnership to the customers.
we have a good relationship with our employees, defined by trust and shared rewards. We share our profit to motivate employees and share in the rewards of the companies success"
these are my words, but i am not satisified with the words i have used..if any changes can be made..please help me
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Hello Darsan-- welcome to English Forums. I have edited your text below, and then moved this thread to our Writing Forums. We have been successfully manufacturing and marketing (product) for more than two decades.
- Hello Darsan-- welcome to English Forums.
- I have edited your text below, and then moved this thread to our Writing Forums.
- We have been successfully manufacturing and marketing (product) for more than two decades.
- We started up our company in 1982 with ( number ) employees.
- Our strong commitment to quality has quickly made us a market leader, with 350 stockists countrywide, and we now employ more than 500 staff directly and indirectly.
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Hello Darsan-- welcome to English Forums. I have edited your text below, and then moved this thread to our Writing Forums.
"SBI is one of the leading (product) manufacturers in (Country).We have been successfully manufacturing and marketing (product) for more than two decades.
We started up our company in 1982 with (number) employees. Our strong commi
"SBI is one of the leading (product) manufacturers in (Country).We have been successfully manufacturing and marketing (product) for more than two decades.
We started up our company in 1982 with (number) employees. Our strong commi
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