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00this is my essay i have to submit it on thursday ,,02br
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00i have 3 conclusion whic one is better ?? c1 or c2 or c302br
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01b01font00Learning Japanese02font02b02br
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01b01font00Have you ever tried to learn Japanese by your self?? Aren't Japanese letters look like strange shapes and impossible to understand!! They aren't, because each new language at the first time you see it will reflect in your mind that it's difficult, even yours to other. There are many steps you can follow when you tend to learn Japanese seriously: learn about its culture, watches live drama or actions and start to learn.02font02b02br
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01b01font00Learn about its culture is the first step you should take in mind. Knowing about the country, its places, people, traditional, customs, religion and other things, then you will be able to be open to learn their language and you will at this step learn local words as well. For example: the word "yukata" is the Japanese traditional custom, this way is easy to learn words with knowledge.02font02b02br
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01b01font00The next and the most interesting step are 02font02b01font00(is about) 02font01b01font00to watch its live drama, live actions and anime. There are many of them to watch, in many categories, such as: school life, comedy, actions, and mysteries. You can easily learn words with hearing it and 02font02b01font00you will02font01b01font00 know the sounds; you can watch the drama more than one time to restate the word in your mind. You can remember the word easily with the action when you hear it, this way is very effective in memorizing new words, also there are many common words are repeated and easy to catch it. For example: "Hayako" is a common word which is mean hurry.02font02b02br
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01b01font00The last and the real step is starting to learn, after you pass the two previous steps you will be now ready to start learning, learn the alphabet, numbers and how to pronounce, in this step you can buy books with cassettes, you can find many lessons free on the internet, use dictionary, and also continue doing the first two steps that help you in both pronouncing and learning new words. 02font02b02br
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01b01u01font00Finally ,02font02u02b01font00 learning Japanese is not impossible when you follow these three steps, knowing about the culture , watching drama and learning it , and combining these three steps you well realize how fun learning Japanese . I recommend every one not to start learning the language without going through the first two steps.02font02br
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01b01font00Learning Japanese is fun when you mix the three steps and get an effective result by following them , each step is a complement for the other .but I do recommend starting in order and pass to the next step while still doing the previous . Japanese is Real fun.02font02b02br
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01b01font00In conclusion, learning Japanese can be easily through three steps, learn about its culture, watches live drama and start to learn. I believed that Japanese is fun when you go through all these steps, also you will get an effective result.02font02b010id1