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Studying abroad is always the desire and also concern of parents. Many suppose children are got the best education they can afford in developed countries. However, others have opposite opinions. They want their children to receive domestic education instead of sending them thousands of miles to another one. I am myself in favour of the first idea for the following reasons.
Currently, education scope and networks are increasingly expanded in Vietnam. Students are approached better technology and training system that cope with the needs of society. However, it is clear to find out the numbers of limitations when we compare developed countries 's educational foundation to ours. Studying abroad gives students the opportunities for improving their world views and enjoying learning conditions with technological advances. Furthermore, students have been shown that immersion is the best way to learn another language and culture. They are completely surrounded by English environment and become natural quickly. Especially, they can become universal citizens through cultural diversity.
In Vietnam, parents think that their kids are always small and weak. They devote too much unconditional love to their children that can lead to dependence. Children thus could lack life skills and be hard to make decisions when they have independent life. In contrast, life abroad can give them lessons of confidence, maturity and skills that are needed in active world. They obviously have to able to look after themselves and sort out their own affairs.
In conclusion, not only can the children study abroad lead an independent life but also get better learning conditions. It is useful and practical in their life. Its disadvantages should be solved before they leave home.