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Chowbarry Posted 8 years ago
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Please help me improve the following sentences

Please help me improve the following sentences. Thank you very much!

Please note that the construction company's workers, rather than the aforestated surveyor, visited our clubhouse to check the defective fences yesterday and eventually certified those fences being without any imminent dangers. On the other hand, due to rainy weather, the workers claimed to be unable to carry out any outdoor electrical works, but promised to start the repair work within these two days, providing the weather is desirsble. Thank you for your attention.

  

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chowbarry Please note that the construction company's workers, rather than the aforestated surveyor, visited our clubhouse to check the defective fences yesterday and eventually certified those fences being without as not posing any imminent dangers. On the other hand, due to rainy weather, the workers claimed to be unable to carry out any outdoor electrical works, but promised to start the repair work within these two days, providing the weather permitting. is desirsble.

— Teechr

  • chowbarry Please note that the construction company's workers, rather than the aforestated surveyor, visited our clubhouse to check the defective fences yesterday and eventually certified those fences being without as not posing any imminent dangers.
  • On the other hand, due to rainy weather, the workers claimed to be unable to carry out any outdoor electrical works, but promised to start the repair work within these two days, providing the weather permitting.
  • is desirsble.
  • Thank you for your attention.
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chowbarryPlease note that the construction company's workers, rather than the aforestated surveyor, visited our clubhouse to check the defective fences yesterday and eventually certified those fences being without as not posing any imminent dangers. On the other hand, due to rainy weather, the workers claimed to be una
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