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In response to your email dated 07.03.2017 and our telephone conversations during the past few weeks, we would like to confirm that as a management party for the shrubs at the roadside area within the district, we will only make a comment on the shrubs you proposed to be planted. For the trees suggested to be planted at the areas and any trees-related matters, you may wish to seek the advice of the Tree Team or any else responsible departments.
Besides, we have in principle no objection to your proposal of conducting enhancement works at our 32 nos. of existing planting areas as details are shown below. However, from our long-term better maintenance point of view, we wish you may consider to plant Syzygium formosanum rather than Lantana camara at the areas indicated on the location maps no. SK-012 & SK-013.
Please let us know your feedback on our proposed arrangement by noon of tomorrow. so that we can advance to discuss the details regarding the handover of the existing planting areas with you shortly.
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2017 and our telephone conversations during the past few weeks, we would like to confirm that as a management party for the shrubs at the roadside areas within the district, we can only make a comment on the shrubs you proposed to be planted. For the trees suggested to be planted at the areas and any trees-related matters, you may wish to seek the advice of the Tree Team or other responsible departments. Besides, w We have in principle no objection to your proposal of conducting enhancement works at our 32 nos.
- 2017 and our telephone conversations during the past few weeks, we would like to confirm that as a management party for the shrubs at the roadside areas within the district, we can only make a comment on the shrubs you proposed to be planted.
- For the trees suggested to be planted at the areas and any trees-related matters, you may wish to seek the advice of the Tree Team or other responsible departments.
- Besides, w We have in principle no objection to your proposal of conducting enhancement works at our 32 nos.
- of existing planting areas as detailed s are shown below.
- However, from our long-term better maintenance point of view, we wish you may wish to consider planting Syzygium formosanum rather than Lantana camara in the areas indicated on the location maps no.
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In response to your email dated 07.03.2017 and our telephone conversations during the past few weeks, we would like to confirm that as a management party for the shrubs at the roadside areas within the district, we can only make a comment on the shrubs you proposed to be planted. For the trees suggested to be planted at the areas and any trees-related matter
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Sara M. Brown
Administrative Assistant
Morganfield General Hospital
424 7650011
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