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Topic: You have planned to study a distance course online from an international university

Write a letter to the university requesting information about the course. Here are some points to consider:

• Why you are writing the letter
• Which course it is and when you plan to study
• Why you want to study this course

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to request information about availing online courses from your university.

I have heard a lot about the various courses offered by Tsinghua University, but the Mandarin one caught most of my attention. I would be grateful if you would give me details about that course. Besides, I would like to ask you to start the course in September as my workload and assignment will be less at that period.

Then, I would like to express my reason why I chose your university’s distance education program. Chinese is the official language of your country, so it is supreme to study this language at your university. In addition, your international programs are famous for providing overseas students with the best convenience. Furthermore, Tsinghua University is the top - not the university of Asia, so it would be my honor to be guided by the prestigious professors there.

Besides, I am entitled to request that you send me the particular scheme, curriculum, and certificate for the online course as these details are not available on the website. The website gives information about fees, duration, and eligibility criteria for admission.

Kindly provide me with the requested information as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Mai Minh Anh