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The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams.
the graph illustrates the gold sales in dubai in the year 2002. As can be seen from the chart, In march the sale amount was highest and lowest in july and september.
According to the line graph, between january and march, there was a sharp rise of 150 million dirharms in the amout of gold sale in dubai and in march the sales amounted 350 million dirharms the highest in the year. After that, from march to july saw a significant decreased of 200 million dirharms in the amount of gold sales. In the next 4 months, the sales amount of dubai gold showed some fluatuations. Inaddition, in the september the sale amout again hit the lowest point of the year at 120 million dirharms. At the end of the year, form october to december, the sales amount of golds leveling out and increased to 190 millions of dirhams.
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The highlighted text all has errors. It is pretty bad, isn't it? Even worse, you did not write the minimum number of words, which will reduce your band score by one or more units. There are additional problems, but if you fix the highlighted words, we can work on
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