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Referring to the Hashida's mail yesterday, he informed me about the grade of fish for last shipment show in the sacks as below
1.Grade C0 is number 33 show on sacks.
2.Grade C1 is number 34 show on sacks.
Therefore, we would like to know the number of each grade show on many sacks for new shipment. Please ask the information from your warehouse and inform me immediately before the vessel will arrive in Sep. 15.
  

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In Hashida's mail yesterday, he informed me about the grade of fish shown on the sacks for the last shipment as below: 1. Grade C0 is number 33 shown on sacks. 2.

  • In Hashida's mail yesterday, he informed me about the grade of fish shown on the sacks for the last shipment as below: 1.
  • Grade C0 is number 33 shown on sacks.
  • 2.
  • Grade C1 is number 34 shown on sacks.
  • Therefore, we would like to know the number of each grade shown on the sacks for the new shipment.
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In Hashida's mail yesterday, he informed me about the grade of fish shown on the sacks for the last shipment as below:

1. Grade C0 is number 33 shown on sacks.
2. Grade C1 is number 34 shown on sacks.


Therefore, we would like to know the number of each grade shown on the sacks for the new shipment. Please ask for this information from your
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