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Havthien Posted 7 years ago
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Please help me impprove my presentation(Full).

Hi everybody,

Thank for helping me last time. Now, I have completed my presentation, please help me check and improve it:

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Chat1k

One and The Crowd Chat App For Streaming

The conventional chat room with the live stream:

Until now, all streaming platforms use a conventional chat room, which does not meet the requirement of allowing conversations between the streamer and the participant.

  • Everyone in the room wants to talk to the streamer but the streamer is only able to respond to one person at a time.
  • Also, because the number of participants can grow very large, the room gets overloaded with messages. The streamer cannot read the messages, so they stop responding to the participants. And the conversation is terminated.

This is all simply because the conventional chat room is not designed for streaming conversations. We really need a dedicated chat app.

Chat1k - The Dedicated Application for Streaming

We have been researching the participant’s interactives in streaming room, and being the first one introducing the “One and The Crowd Conversation” concept. From that concept, we are building an app with features that support and solve the issues, which the conventional chat room is facing.

  • Firstable, there are many people have the same idea, opinion,...but why all of them have to send every message and the streamer have to respond one by one and many time they have to repeat the answer?
  • Chat1k allow people to vote for the message that they like, and we design one more chat box to display the messages which have a significant amount of vote, it’s called “Top Chat”. Therefore, the crowd’s opinion is highlighted and the streamer can give the answer to many people. This is how Chat1k make the conversation between One and the crowd.
  • One the number of participants can grow too large, Chat1k divide them into groups. People in each group only see and vote for the new messages from their group in the “New chat” box. But all participants and streamer still see the same “Top chat” box, and it is easy for them to focus on the main topic of the conversation. This mechanism makes sure the message overloaded never happen with Chat1k, allow the conversation to keep continuing with the unlimited participant.

Chat1k is the world’s first and only App for One and The Crowd Conversation. People can start and keep the conversation between One and The Crowd going naturally and more meaningful, just like two friends talking to each other.
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Thanks and Best Regard.

  

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  • ) Everyone in the room wants to talk to the streamer but the streamer is only able to respond to one person at a time.
  • Also, because the number of participants can grow very large, the room gets overloaded with messages.
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Chat1k

One and The Crowd Chat App For Streaming

The conventional chat room with the live stream:

Until now, all streaming platforms use a conventional chat room, which does not meet the requirement of allo

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