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The statistic illustrates fundamental data about the utilization of downtime among three age groups.
The table encompasses a 13-19-year-old group, a 20-65-year-old group, and an above 66-year-old group. Members of each group spend disparate time reading, using the computer, and working out.
The young seem not to love reading because they merely use 5 minutes per weekend day to read while the time they use the computer is the highest, 75 minutes. Contrary to the young group, the old one spend an hour reading and half an hour using the computer. The middle-age group spends the same time both reading and utilizing the computer, 30 minutes.
The amount of time the 20-65-year-old group spends on sports and exercise is the highest, 2 hours after that is the young's with 60 minutes. The old group's expenditure on workout is only 20 minutes.
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