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Judliska Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
please help me, I have to answer a recruiter's mail (I've answered it very shortly) :)
Hi!
I have got a positive answer from a headhunting company, and I would like to answer that mail, but I'm not sure that my answer is correct and polite enough. Please take a look at my mail!
Dear Lena,
Thank you for your quick reply and for considering my application.
I have strong intention of finding a job in the Netherlands however it's quite difficult as I'm still living in Hungary that's why I'm extremely grateful that you are dealing with my application.
Regarding my plans I am going to finish my studies in December and I'm planning to move over towards middle of January. I would like to live in one of the bigger cities like Hage, Amsterdam, Utrecht but I'm flexible depending on where a free position would be available. I would also appreciate the chance to personally introduce myself to you. I could come to you for an interview in December.
Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.
J.
I have got a positive answer from a headhunting company, and I would like to answer that mail, but I'm not sure that my answer is correct and polite enough. Please take a look at my mail!
Dear Lena,
Thank you for your quick reply and for considering my application.
I have strong intention of finding a job in the Netherlands however it's quite difficult as I'm still living in Hungary that's why I'm extremely grateful that you are dealing with my application.
Regarding my plans I am going to finish my studies in December and I'm planning to move over towards middle of January. I would like to live in one of the bigger cities like Hage, Amsterdam, Utrecht but I'm flexible depending on where a free position would be available. I would also appreciate the chance to personally introduce myself to you. I could come to you for an interview in December.
Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.
J.
Top answer
J: It's an appropriate reply. I have made some suggestions for minor changes. judliska Dear Lena, >> Using a first name is very informal.
- J: It's an appropriate reply.
- I have made some suggestions for minor changes.
- judliska Dear Lena, >> Using a first name is very informal.
- Thank you for your quick reply and for considering my application.
- I have a strong desire intention of finding a job in the Netherlands , however it's quite difficult as I'm still living in Hungary , T hat's why I'm extremely grateful that you are dealing with my application.
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J: It's an appropriate reply. I have made some suggestions for minor changes.
judliskaDear Lena,>> Using a first name is very informal.
Thank you for your quick reply and for considering my application.
I have a strong desireintentionof finding a job in the Netherlands, however it's quite difficult as I'm sti
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