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please help me guys!

anyone can revise my request letter. :-)

General Manager

Thru:
HR Manager

Dear Ma'am/Sir,

We would like to ask in your good office to provide us transportation twice every month so that we can buy our food and stuff. We all knew that taking taxi here in Saudi is not safe for women.

Listed Below are the dates and areas that we are planning to go, upon receiving our salary.

Enjaz on June 30, 2012/sat
Hyper Panda on july 01, 2012/sun

We are hoping for your favorable consideration and approval regarding this matter.

Sincerely,
  

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General Manager Dear Mr [surname], We would like to ask t he company to kindly provide us transportation twice every month so that we can buy food and other staple s , because taking a taxi here in Saudi Arabia is not safe for women. Here a re the dates and areas that we are hoping for upon receiving our salary. Enjaz on Saturday, June 30th Hyper Panda on Sunday, July 1st We are looking forward to your favorable consideration and approval of this plan.

  • General Manager Dear Mr [surname], We would like to ask t he company to kindly provide us transportation twice every month so that we can buy food and other staple s , because taking a taxi here in Saudi Arabia is not safe for women.
  • Here a re the dates and areas that we are hoping for upon receiving our salary.
  • Enjaz on Saturday, June 30th Hyper Panda on Sunday, July 1st We are looking forward to your favorable consideration and approval of this plan.
  • Sincerely,
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General Manager

Dear Mr [surname],

We would like to ask the company to kindly provide us transportation twice every month so that we can buy food and other staples, because taking a taxi here in Saudi Arabia is not safe for women.

Here are the dates and areas that we are hoping for upon receiving our salary.

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