PLEASE HELP ME FUND MY HIGHER EDUCATION TO STUDY MBBS IN UK

Hi

I am writing a letter asking businesses to help me fund my college education. I am tring to make it brief, detailed, and delete as much irrelevant and repetitive information as possible. Please give me your best opinions and or recommendations about it.

My name is Miss <<name removed by moderator>> and I am Indian by nationality but residing in UK as a international student since 2007 and completed HND in Marine Engineering with specialization in Mechanical Engineering but my only ambition since childhood is to be a doctor. So I went through the necessary procedures and have been accepted to Newcastle Medical School, Newcastle, UK where I plan to do further my education. Newcastle Medical School is a prestigious, highly selective, college that prepares students to change the world. Its liberal education in medicine empowers students to excel intellectually, think creatively, serve wholeheartedly, act globally, and lead boldly and so on.

I am currently seeking financial sponsors to help me with tuition, and hope I can count on your support. This University has educated various students who have reached the highest levels of academic, community, and professional achievement. The University has a legacy of empowering students to succeed and to lead.

Personally, I am looking forward to broadening my perspectives of the world and gaining a better understanding of the person I am and who I want to become. By continuing my higher education at the University, I plan to study Medical Microbiology and Human Immunology with a concentration in biomedical sciences for this year. After its successful completion on next year, I plan to study Undergraduate MBBS to become a doctor. I want to become a doctor because I want to help those who are less fortunate, specifically I want to provide my service to alleviate the AIDS epidemic etc., etc. That is the essence of being a doctor and why I will be one.

The total funds needed as my tution fees is 13365 Great Britain Pounds for this year and from next year onwards I need to pay 25000 Great Britain Pounds every year for five years. The tution fees is too high for me because I am an international student in UK and I am unable to pay such a huge amount of money. I am asking any willing contributors to each donate some amount of money to help me reach my goal. Is it possible for you to assist me by making a contribution? Any amount of contribution would be greatly appreciated. If you are willing to support me, then me and my parents would be very happy to pay you the same with the interest you desire for. Please try to make the contribution as soon as possible as I am missing my classes. I can provide proof of my acceptance from this University and proof of attendance and once I complete my first year I will send the contributors a copy of my certificate. Also you are free to contact the higher authorities of the University and can confirm my acceptance from the Medical School.

My program tuition started on 22/09/2009 but I was unable to attend my classes till date because I couldn't pay the tution fees and I am still searching a person who can sponsor me for my studies, just trying to avoid my career and future from getting ruined and if at last I don't find anyone then, I will have to go back to India and complete my studies from there, which I don't want because from 2007, I am very much familiar with the education process in UK and I find it much more easier to complete my studies from this country rather than going back to my country.

Please feel free to contact me on <<contact information removed>> or email me at <<email address removed>> in or you can meet me at my residence if you need further more information. Your generous contribution would enable me to share in this wonderful opportunity. Thank you in advance for your consideration, support, and generous response. I look forward to thanking you for your support, and will of course be writing to let you know how my college experience goes.

Respectfully,

<<name removed>>