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Earthwindandsky Posted 8 years ago
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Please help me form this sentence, it doesn't sound good when I read it. TY!

For a long time people have been deceived by big pharmaceutical companies and their misleading propaganda which was implemented through government to all the nations around the world via television in order to maintain and expand their business, while keeping people ignorant about the plant which has the power to heal people for much less than pills being sold in nice looking boxes, sold by pharmaceuticals who finished fancy schools so you think the bunch of chemicals stuffed inside a pill which were prescribed by a doctor who works for one of the companies, will help you while it actually hurts you more or maintains you on a healthy “placebo effect” until your body heals itself.

  

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You need to break this into several separate sentences. If you do that, we'll be happy to give you further help.

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earthwindandskyFor a long time people have been deceived by big pharmaceutical companies

Don't be deceived by the doctors and big pharma with their highly-propagandized costly pills, having been subject to substantial government regulation and having had to go through the drudgery of extravagant, inordinate clinical trials to prove their safety and eff

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