Please help me fixing this writing task 1 in IELTS
The given chart illustrates the yearly GDP growth rate in three different countries namely Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010.
Overall, it is obvious that there was a significantly rise in the annual GDP growth in Japan, while the opposite was true for that in Tunisia and Japan.
In 2007, the percentage of GDP growth in Tunisia declined steadily, was double than that in 2010. Besides, the figure for GDP growth in Ecuador has constantly changed over the period shown, that was grow in 2008 and had a downward trend in two years after.
On the other hand, there was a dramatically increase in the proportion of the annual GDP growth. This rise was remarkably considerable between 2007 and 2010. It is also noticeable that the figure for GDP growth in Japan was reach a peak in 2010, three times and twice as much as in Tunisia, Ecuador respectively.
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