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- The table compares the changeable trends of medical healthcare in the UK, UK, and AUS from 1980 to 2000.
- Overall, there were steady increases in the number of patients and beds in the hospital in all three countries over 20 years while the number of days of staying in the hospital of three countries experienced slight decreases at the same time.
- Looking at the table, the highest number of patients in the UK stood at 200.000 patients in 1980, followed by the US and AUS, with just 150.000 and 80.000 patients respectively. By 2000, UK and US had significant increases to 260.000 patients and 185.000 patients. Also, AUS rose slightly by 10.000 patients from 1980 to 2000 though, this figure declined slightly by 10.000 patients in the latter ten years. Simultaneously, the number of beds in the hospital in the UK, US, and AUS had considerable increases by 2000 beds in each country after 20 years, with 15.000, 17.000 and 10.000 respectively.
- in terms of the number of days of staying in the hospital, in 1980, the US had the highest number of days, with 20 days. However, this figure decreased steadily to 15 days in 2000. Also, the two declines were seen again in the UK and AUS in 2000, with 10 days in the US and 12 days in the AUS
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