Please help me fix the essay below. Thanks so much! Question: children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you...

It is argued that children who are nurture in a poor family can easily deal with problems and pressures when they live in adulthood while others who live in a richer family have some difficulties in solving problems in their future life. As far as I am concerned, I side with this statement.

On the one hand, some people believe that some children from the middle and low-class families might be in the good position. Children from the poor parents learn how to deal with difficult situation, and learn to fight, struggle and solve the problem of daily basis. As a result, poor children are becoming more hard worker and heave more patience. For instance, poor children may have to wait until their birthday for favorite toy or game that they have asked fir, and this encourage them to learn the patience. Those children also learn the importance of money which help then in the later life.

On the other hand, these experts also believe that children who are raised in rich families will face with difficulties when they grow up and face with challenged situations in the real world. One of the reason that their parents have provided them with all the materials they want and needed. They have fancy clothes, expensive toys, and advanced gadgets in their hands without having to work hard. As they rely heavily on their parents wealth, they will face problems if there is a financial crisis. For example, one of the richest colleagues in my company, Niana, was stuck in depression for along time after her family had been forced into bankruptcy. It stems from her less chances of suffering from stress and depression in the past.

In conclusion, I believe that children from the middle and low-class families can better deals with the tress and problems of the adult life than the richer parent's children. Pooer children are more confidence and successful in their life