Please help me fix task 1. ielts

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph indicates the number of passengers using London Underground Station from 6 AM to 10 PM. Overall, there are fluctuations during the day but the most crowded is in 8 AM and almost the same number of passengers is in 6 PM in the station.

Looking at the graph, in the early morning, the passengers go to London Underground station is minor, with 100 passengers. The number of passengers starts to rise to 200 at 7 AM and continues to increase significantly and reach the highest number of passengers in the morning with 400 passengers. After that, it starts to fall steadily to 300 passengers at 9 AM and dramatically drop to around 190 passengers at 10 AM.

From 10 AM to 2 PM, the number of travelers using underground station increases gradually in each hour, from 190 to 300 passengers. The station witnesses the significant fall in 3 PM and 4 PM, with around 225 and 100 passengers, respectively. It goes up again in 5 PM and reaches the highest point in the afternoon at 6 PM with around 390 passengers. In the evening, the number of passengers decreases to 125 at 8 PM and at the end of the survey period, it reaches almost 150 at 10 PM.