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The given bar chart compares the percentage of males and females living alone in England regarding various age groups in 2011, while the pie chart gives information about the rate of number of bedrooms in their houses.

Overall, the proportion of alone woman was higher than man for all ages. Meanwhile, house holds which had 2 bedrooms accounted for the highest rate.

Turning to the details, the figure of alone man was higher than woman from 16 to 49 years old, especially, the gap of them was 15% in 35-49 age group. By contract, after 65 year old, the rate of alone males decreased gradually and was significant lower then females, with around 30% and 70%, respectively. Only 50-64 age group had two these figure which was similar.

According to the pie chart, the data on the house having 2 bedrooms was the biggest, at 35,4%. The percentage of having 3 bedrooms was almost as high as bedroom, with under a third, each figure. Finally, the remaining just 6.7% consisted of the proportion of 4 or more bedrooms.