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Today. I'm going to tell you about my schedule if I had ten million dollars. There are somethings I would do if I had ten million dollars . Firstly I would buy a new house in district 7 in HCM city because that is one part my dream and I'm really like security and environment clean very good in there. Secondly I would go to travel all around the world such as Spain,England,Korea,China so on because they have famous food, travel, wonderful view and specially I like the most in Spain because where I have a football team that I fan. Thirdly. If I had ten million dollars I would send 50% into the bank and take interest . Finally I would help poor people have no support . I'm very happy if I had ten million dollars when I to do it . Thanks for listening

  

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Toda y, I'm going to tell you about my schedule what I would do if I had ten million dollars. There are som e t hings I would do if I had ten million dollar s. Firstl y, I would buy a new house in D istrict 7 in HCM C ity because that is one part of my drea m, and I'm I really like the security and the clean and healthy environment clean very good in there.

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  • Toda y, I'm going to tell you about my schedule what I would do if I had ten million dollars.
  • There are som e t hings I would do if I had ten million dollar s.
  • Firstl y, I would buy a new house in D istrict 7 in HCM C ity because that is one part of my drea m, and I'm I really like the security and the clean and healthy environment clean very good in there.
  • Secondl y, I would go to travel all around the world to places such as Spain , E ngland , K orea , C hina and so on because they have famous food, travel, and wonderful things to see.
  • view and specially I like the most in particularly want to visit Spain because where I have a football team that I am a fan of a famous Spanish football team.
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Today, I'm going to tell you about my schedule what I would do if I had ten million dollars. There are some things I would do if I had ten million dollars. Firstly, I wou

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For contemporary business and American English, do not use "firstly, secondly, thirdly. " Use "first, second, third."

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