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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
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You have made me a humble and simple heart that continues to seek God. You have made me a steadfast and noble heart that does not grow weary amidst defeats and frustrations, a heart that does not nurse hatred and can forgive, one that remains faithful, even if it is not understood. You have made me a heart that can sympathize with the sufferings of others…a heart that can appreciate small blessings of love…a heart that continues to give, though others make it suffer and leave it behind…a heart that freely serves the country and the people of God…a heart that never loses hope despite the impending trials. You have molded me a heart like yours, filled with the love of God and love for all, a heart that is ruled by the Spirit of love.
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Who is "you"? Continue similarly with semicolon phrases for the rest- the English seems fine. You have made me a heart that: is humble and simple which continues to seek ***; is a steadfast and noble; does not grow weary amidst defeats and frustration; does not nurse hatred; can forgive; remains faithful, even if not understood; can sympathize with the sufferings of others; ....
- Who is "you"?
- Continue similarly with semicolon phrases for the rest- the English seems fine.
- You have made me a heart that: is humble and simple which continues to seek ***; is a steadfast and noble; does not grow weary amidst defeats and frustration; does not nurse hatred; can forgive; remains faithful, even if not understood; can sympathize with the sufferings of others; ....
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Who is "you"?
Continue similarly with semicolon phrases for the rest- the English seems fine.
You have made me a heart that: is humble and simple which continues to seek ***; is a steadfast and noble; does not grow weary amidst defeats and frustration; does not nurse hatred; can forgive; remains faithful, even if not understood; can sympathize with the sufferings of others; ....
Continue similarly with semicolon phrases for the rest- the English seems fine.
You have made me a heart that: is humble and simple which continues to seek ***; is a steadfast and noble; does not grow weary amidst defeats and frustration; does not nurse hatred; can forgive; remains faithful, even if not understood; can sympathize with the sufferings of others; ....
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