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The pie chart illustrates information about the ages of Yemen, Italy residents in 2000 and the prediction in 2050.

 

Overall, the adults group is a large proportion in 2 countries. In Yemen, the oldest people group is the lowest point in two years. While in Italy, the youngest people group is the lowest number.

 

As regards, in 2000, Yemen had 50.1 % of kids in the whole population. Meanwhile, it will reduce dramatically to 37% in 2050. In Italy, the youngest group accounted for 14.3% in 2000 and it was predicted to decrease to 11.5% in 2050.

 

Regarding to the adults group, in Yemen, the surge of the adults group went up 46.3% in 2000 and will increase to 57.3% in 2050. On the other hand, the aldults group in Italy rose 61.6% in 2000 but in 2050, it was projected to drop to 46.2%.

 

According to the oldest group, the percentage of oldest people will rise from 3.6% to 5.7% between 2000 and 2050 in Yemen. The figure of oldest people in 2000 was 24% in Italy and it was predicted to be approximately doubled in 2050.

 

 

  
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