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Dear All,

I am preparing my job interview for acdamic staff at international school of entrepreneur.

Please help me about this.

1.What are the main responsibilities of this position? (ask about my understanding of this position)

The main responsibilities are to advisory in curriculum, citeria and regulation of this dsipline that comply with rule of university and also support them with related activities to be great graduates that both in acdemic and ethic.

2.How did you perform credit analysis? (Ask about my previous job)

First, I performed following as criteria and policy of the company and considered of ability to pay of customers, These were:

Imcome, debt, expense

as well as ,y common sense

3.What diffence of personal loan and hire purchase loan?

There are differce in term of porducts that you provided: cash and motercylce

and risk management: hire purchase ,you can decease risk by adjust down payment and / or personal guarantee.

4.Why did you enroll this subject cross the university (ask about this subject in my transcript)

Because this subject was not available on the second semester which effect to my finished.

5.What was the business that you usually recoomended to your customer did? ( ASsk about the anather previous job that was consultation for new enterpreneour)

I could not do like this to tell someone do this business and other ones do that business, I think they should know their self first regarding their skills, their interest and their strong point and convert them to theor business and can answer these quations first:

What are your customer?

Why they have to buy your products because there are mamy products in the markets ?

such as you would like to run in food business. First you should consider about your skills ,your strong points, that you can cook with good tast, good location something like these.

I very much appreciate for your all comment

thank you

debangkok