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Mamie Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

please help me edit my motivational letter for my masters program

RE CURRICULUM FOR MASTERS STUDIES

I am Ndilimeke Haimbili, holding Computer Science Honours Degree in Communication Networks, Bachelor degree in System Administration and Networks both obtained from Polytechnic of Namibia. Furthermore I received performance certificate last year 2015 for being a best student in research overall. I am here by writing to emphasise on my experience and my field of interest in Masters of Computer Science.
I am currently working as an ICT Administrator where my responsibilities are backing up and monitoring servers on daily basis, overseeing computer security and information security, providing support to users, inducting new staff on IT systems and monitoring network on daily basis. Working as an ICT administrator developed my interest for information security and this has given me courage to peruse my Master’s degree in this area , I am highly fascinated by Information security the fact that it’s not a single technology but rather a strategy comprised of the process, tools and policies necessary to prevent, detect and encounter threats to vulnerable information within organization. This is also the area my company is focusing on, soon it will be a significant role and I would like to be part of the well-equipped team to effectively serve my purpose. Additionally there are still project out there in different company about this area that I would love to be part of in future.

I am very interested in any topic that falls under this area, and I am still busy searching for one that I feel will satisfy my keenness while also I am open to any input. However I believe this Master’s program will provide me with better research writing skills and experience which will allow me in achieving my goals. I am a principled person and I perform to my level best in all tasks that I set my mind to. I am also open and eager to challenge that exceed my current best and with this I look forward to developing myself further with this course.

I am looking forward to your prompt reply

Yours Faithfully
…………………………….
Haimbili Ndilimeke Ms
  

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to outline my motivation for applying for the Master of Computer Science program at XYZ. I am Ndilimeke Haimbili, holding have a Computer Science h onours d egree in Communication Networks, and a Bachelo r's degree in System s Administration and Network s, both obtained from the Polytechnic of Namibia. Furthermor e, I received a P erformance C ertificate last year 2015 for being the best research student at my institution.

  • Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to outline my motivation for applying for the Master of Computer Science program at XYZ.
  • I am Ndilimeke Haimbili, holding have a Computer Science h onours d egree in Communication Networks, and a Bachelo r's degree in System s Administration and Network s, both obtained from the Polytechnic of Namibia.
  • Furthermor e, I received a P erformance C ertificate last year 2015 for being the best research student at my institution.
  • in research overall.
  • I am here by writing to emphasise on my experience and my field of interest in Masters of Computer Science.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to outline my motivation for applying for the Master of Computer Science program at XYZ.

I am Ndilimeke Haimbili, holding have a Computer Science honours degree in Communication Networks, and a Bachelor's degree in Systems Administration and Networks, both obtained from the
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thank you very much , may the almighty bless you
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You're welcome. I wish you all the best in your studies.

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