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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so government should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people consider that helping all needy people all around the world would be an impossible ideal. Therefore, the government should only concern about those who live in their own countries. I completely disagree with this view.
On the one hand, it is true that now possible to provide international aid quickly and effectively. Nowadays, Modern of transport enable government branch to provide funding for remote areas across the world within hours. Thanks to this aid, international bodies has reducing sufferings and save lives. Recently, the flooding in the northern part of Vietnam cause of many peoples homeless, who live in desperate need of foods and shelter, the national and local authorities sponsorship around the world is immediate. Very quickly, supplies of foods and tents arrived by air, along with medical staff.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that we share a moral responsibility to support lack of the basic necessary of life is a great way. One reason is that national government should be recognized their international obligations to allocate resources on not only local but also the whole of the world. It is not enough to place responsibility on only non-government organizations such as Red Cross or United state. Another reason is that government is not only permission provide global aid a part of their budget, but also provide funding for international aid bodies. We should share a common humanity, give needy people moral and economy support to overcome difficult stages in life.
In conclusion, although of course government should be tackled urgently problems in their own countries, they have also many ways and moral responsibilities to fulfil the government obligations to all of people in need.
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Some people consider that helping all needy people all around in the world would be an impossible ideal. Therefore, they argue that the a government should only be concer ned about the welfare of its own citizens. those who live in their own countries.
- Some people consider that helping all needy people all around in the world would be an impossible ideal.
- Therefore, they argue that the a government should only be concer ned about the welfare of its own citizens.
- those who live in their own countries.
- I completely disagree with this view.
- On the one hand, it is true that now possible to provide international aid quickly and effectively.
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Some people consider that helping all needy people all around in the world would be an impossible ideal. Therefore, they argue that the a government should only be concerned about the welfare of its own citizens. those who live in their own countries. I completely disagree with this view.
On the one hand, it is
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