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Shasam Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Please help me correct this,i have tried a few!!!!

I had been in London for about four days,I saw the Tower of London ,the Tower Bridge the Big Ben and the other famous places (visited)

(have)

of this city.To arrive in Bath, I brought a coach.The journey was long but I'm very happy to arrive in this town.I didn't stay here

( Word order) I took a coach to Bath.

before ,but all my friends who saw Bath tell me that it is very beautiful.I hope I enjoy myself very much.

As for the other corrections I didn't know...............
  

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It was a long journey and I was very happy to arrive here. I hope I enjoy myself very much. Best wishes, Clive

  • It was a long journey and I was very happy to arrive here.
  • I hope I enjoy myself very much.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

I suggest:

I was in London for about four days and I saw the Tower of London, Tower Bridge, Big Ben and other famous places.To get to Bath, I took a coach.It was a long journey and I was very happy to arrive here. I hadn't stayed here before ,but all my friends who had seen Bath told me th

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