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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart compares the cellphone sales in terms of their share of the global market in 2005 and 2006.

Overall, Nokia has the highest market share in both years, on the other hand, BenQ Mobile has the smallest global share. In 2006, the percentage of most companies fell, however, Nokia, Motorola, and Sony Ericsson rose.

Nokia was the leading mobile phone producers of the worldwide market which share increased from 32.5% to 35%. The nearest competitor was Motorola which saw a significant increase in sales from 17.7% to 21.1%. Sony Ericson also grew its sales slightly from 6.3% in 2005 to reach 7.4% in 2006.

In contrast, the market share of Samsung declined by almost 1% to 11.8% in 2006. L.G also decreased from 6.7% in 2005 to 6.3% in 2006. The worldwide market share of the BenQ mobile declining 2.5% from the previous year fell to just 2.4% in 2006. There was a 3% drop in the market share of other manufacturers to 16.2%.