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Topic: the diagrams show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

The diagrams illustrate a school site in 2004 and how it will be changed in 2024.

Overall, a new school building and an additional car park will appear after 20 years due to the increase in numbers of students.

In 2004, the number of students was 600 and the school had 2 blocks which were located in the north-east corner of a main entrance. In 2024, it is predicted that there will be 1000 pupils so the third building will be constructed. Furthermore, people will erect a short new path to connect 3 buildings in the future.

In 2004, there was a big sports field in the north-east corner of the main entrance but in 2024, it will be replaced by the third building and a new car park. The site of the sports field will be relocated to the south-west of the second car park with a smaller size. Also, a new road will be constructed between the main entrance and the second car park in this year. Finally, no changes will be made to a car park 1 and the main entrance.