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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please help me correct this invitation wordings

Could you please help me correct this invitation....

The Riverdale family,
requests the pleasure of your company
at a ceremony to bestow xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
with the papal order of St. Gregory the Great

On Saturday, the 8th of January 2011
11.00 a.m., at St. Mary's Basilica, Finland
and thereafter to a reception in the Parish Hall.

His Eminence Cardinal xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
will bestow this honour upon him.
  

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M. at St. Mary's Basilica, Finland and thereafter at a reception in the Parish Hall.

— Mister Micawber

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  • Mary's Basilica, Finland and thereafter at a reception in the Parish Hall.
  • His Eminence [ first name ] Cardinal [ last name ] will bestow the honour.
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The Riverdale family
requests the pleasure of your attendance
at a ceremony to bestow upon [first name] Riverdale

the Papal Order of Saint Gregory the Great
On Saturday, the 8th of January, 2011, 11.00 A.M.
at St. Mary's Basilica, Finland
and thereafter at a reception in the Parish Hall.
His Em
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countless thanks to you.........

I am extremely sorry to get you confused...
I changed the original to a dummy text. Just don't wanted to make the original text confidential.
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sorry I made a mess of the last sentence.

please read as "wanted to make the original text confidential"
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