Please help me correct this Ielts writing task 1 . Thank you very much.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.

Answer

The diagram illustrates the diferent stages of a frog’s life cycle.

Overall, there are seven stages beginiing with mating and ending with the developent of a mature frog.

The first stage starts with the mating of female and male frog. Then, the female frog lays a numerous number of eggs called frogspawn. In the third stage, these grog spawns hacth and become small tadpoles. During the next stage, the tadpoles grow bigger and there is a formation of limbs.

By the fifth stage, the tadpole now has developed into a young frog with shorter tail and the significant growth of ars and legs. Once this young frog become a muture frog, it has no tail and its limbs have developed fully. The mature grog continues to grow in size and get ready to leave the water to become an adult and to mate in the last stage. The cycle continues again.