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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.

Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

People have different views about what kind of food we are not supposed to eat. While there are some doubts about vegetarian commnunity in the future, I still believe that it will be a huge benefit for both our health and the whole world if we do not eat meat or fish in daily meal.

Undoubtedly, in many cultures, meat is the one of main ingredient in traditional meals. Though for some reasons depended on various factor, for example the tradiontion of the country, the wealth of the country, the religion or the age group, people choose not to eat meat or fish or some kinds of them, it is undeniable, meat and fish is a completely food because it contains all the necessary nutrients, especially protein. Moveover, meat-eaters argue that in the food chain animals are below human. Consequently, it is completely natural for people to kill them for food.

On the other hand, vegetarians who do not eat foods that are produced by killing animals strongly believe that a healthy diet is possible without eating meat. They may feel selfish to eat meat by killing them. They choose a vegetarian diet for moral of healthy reasons. The fact that It is true that not eating meat and fish can reduce the risk of disease like cancer. In addition, research shows that vegetarians tend to be healthier in many ways than meat-eaters. As a result, it is unnecessary to kill animal for food.

Personally, I think that being a vegetarian is a really good idea not only for ourself but also for social. The matter is that it does not suit everyone and I wonder when it will ever be a universal choice.