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what will be change in the next 50 years?

Since people have lived in this world, there were many things which together have improved with the growth of the population such as lifestyles, social education, culture, health care and technology. All of these things are only focused on improvement of the standard of the people around the world. In this essay we will discuss about two factors that which will be going to be change in the next 50 years.

Firstly, in the next 50 years Technology will be invested more in the education factor to improve the standard of the education of the people around the world. Such as technology equipment will be provided to the student in every part of the school to support them on their study and giving them a chance to practice with the real equipments. Especially in the rural area, which are many schools do not have enough equipment to support their student such as computer, television, table and chair will have provided on. More over, internet will be focus to be easy to access for the rural area. The reason is internet is the world wild technology that student can exploit. For example, in the internet there are many devices that were built to help the student on searching the information they needed on their study easier and wasted less of time than stay in the library and reading a big pile of different books.

In the same way security will bring the technology up in use to improve the standard of the protection system, such as Biometrics will be used in the public and personal place to assure the security guard. For instance, car and house will have the sound scanning which will identify the owner by the owner will say a word likes a password to make an order for the system to do likes open the door or window. This Biometrics will remember the tone sound of the owner which will be hardly to access by the visitor or others people. In addition, Car will have a GPRS security guide which will help the police to monitor in case it has a thief in the car. The camera which place inside the car invisibly can look all around the car and detect for the unusual stuffs likes a knife, gun, grenade and many weapon and non weapon that can be use in the crime and war. Further more, the camera can detect the temperature of the people inside the car which will help the police to underestimate the condition and get ready to help in time likes if the driver is too drunk or there some one got a bad sick.

In conclusion, in the next 50 years the world will be improved in the unpredictable ways. Such as there will be a new machine that invested in order to help the unable person to have a same education with normal student not only in the city but also in the rural area and so on in the security that will bring up the standard to make people more secure and stay happily, these security system are an electronic scanner that help on identify the owner which in another word we call Biometrics. These changes will bring up the standard of the people around the world such as it will change people lifestyle and people livelihood.