Please help me correct this. .

I was interested not only in the modules on Aviation Management but also in the Business and Management Science and I realized how important these are to combine the traditional benefits of Business with a focus on the aviation sector resulting in maximum value for Business in aviation. And I would like to understand the industry’s complexities from a business management perspective and apply to aviation industry.

The need to build up my knowledge in business administration and the deep interest for aviation have led me a passion to attend the Management Science and Business Administration program . I’m also looking to boost my skills and education to move to the next level of management.

thx in advance