PLEASE help me correct these sentences trouble with?

Could you please help me with these sentences I'm having trouble with?

1 I went to go see/visit an apartment; an apartment I wasn't sure was worth taking pictures of. I didn't want to say anything if It wasn't worth mentioning.

2 This camera doesn't take nice picture.

3 I gave him the idea to buy that.

4 You talk badly to him. You talk to him like he did to your ex husband as if you're already tired of your new boyfriend. If you love him to much to be rude, you should be a little nicer to him.

5 My story was on two pages since I had made the font so much bigger.

6 The festival runs through next Friday./through to the 27^th.

7 I want to see how many times she's able to lie to me.

8 I want to help her as much as I can, especially with the bridal shower. I'll do what I can with what I have. Compared to/In relation to my salary I give her a lot.

9 I have so much debt/so many debts.

10 I'll know if I've won the money in an hour.

11 Don't leave the faucet on too weak as water will splatter everywhere.

12 Don't you hate it when your hands are wet and a strand of hair sticks to your fingers, and you can't get it off.

13 What's the latest possible time you can come?

Thank you