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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
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Please help me correct these sentences. Thank you.

Although working with children is funny, I still prefer to clean up the community, because cleaning the community is important for the people who live in the community. They will feel happy when they see us help them clean trash. Also not many people would like to do this work and I think I am capable of it. Moreover, I can’t bear dirty things. When I see something dirty, I would like to clean it up instantly.
  

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Although working with children is fun, I still prefer cleaning in the community. This is because community members recognize the importance of cleanliness around them and feel happy when they see us cleaning away trash. It is my choice also because not many people like to do this work whereas I do.

  • Although working with children is fun, I still prefer cleaning in the community.
  • This is because community members recognize the importance of cleanliness around them and feel happy when they see us cleaning away trash.
  • It is my choice also because not many people like to do this work whereas I do.
  • I clean up because I can't bear things being dirty.
  • Moreover, I am capable of doing this work well.
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Although working with children is fun, I still prefer cleaning in the community. This is because community members recognize the importance of cleanliness around them and feel happy when they see us cleaning away trash. It is my choice also because not many people like to do this work whereas I do. I clean up because I can't bear things being dirty. Moreover, I am capable of doing this work wel
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Thank you. It looks much flow.

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