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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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please help me correct these sentences.
Once upon a time, there was a girl who had too much wine--she turned purple.
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There is nothing wrong with yours, but this might be a little more effective: Once upon a time, there was a girl who had too much wine . She turned purple.
- There is nothing wrong with yours, but this might be a little more effective: Once upon a time, there was a girl who had too much wine .
- She turned purple.
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There is nothing wrong with yours, but this might be a little more effective:
Once upon a time, there was a girl who had too much wine. She turned purple.
Once upon a time, there was a girl who had too much wine. She turned purple.
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