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I think they were really expensive.

Girls nowaday can make themselves beautiful by costing even a little money.

Which was impossible in that time.

Cause my mom earned only about 60 yuan per month.

A batwing-sleeved blouse of mine would take us 13 or 14 yuan.

Even 16 yuan.

So of course they were expensive.

Besides, it was so difficult to get one.

They couldn’t be bought except if through some special ways.

Therefore those clothes in common markets, were all not pretty to be dressed up.

I think there are so many good-looking and interesting things nowadays.

A great many, really.

While there were not in that time.

And in that time, it was so special in the streets that even if I just wore a pair of brown silk stockings.

But nowadays, it doesn’t matter whatever kind of silk stockings you wear, isn’t it?

However, in that time, the girls would come and have a look.

Or your beautiful shoes.

When you were riding a bike, in a pair of heels, people who ride past would look at you in this way.

Unlike now, it doesn’t matter whatever you wear.

Your music has a strong personality and individuality. What do you think being unique means in China?

I think in China, being unique means being the first person to try tomato.

I don’t think it means getting a lot of pressure.

It’s just that people have not realized yet that it is a good thing.

And the whole situation has not completely receive it yet.

But gradually it gets OK.

When I was singing pop songs, the neighbors said, hey, that person sings bettter than you! What the hell are you singing?

Actually he thought it sounded nice. He just can’t understand it.

But gradually, I believe that pop music will be our generation’s, by all and all means.