Please help me correct the following email.
Please help me correct the following email. Thank you very much.
Regarding your email dated 14.03.2017, we are sorry to learn that the door lock of your container at our shipyard had recently been found broken and understand your feeling that the above incident may be caused by vandalism. However, having checked throughout our shipyard, we haven't found any signs of vandalism nor have we been informed of having any properties damaged and loss from other tenants lately.
As such, we are not intended to report the case to the police for further action, but we aim to enhance our security control by requiring all the visitors to register before entering the shipyard and continue closely monitoring the security condition and make necessary improvement in near future. Likewise, we are pleased with your prompted replacement of the door lock of the container, which should be right for your own security management.
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As usual, too many words. Thank you for your prompt replacement of your container door lock at our shipyard. We are sorry that it was recently found broken and agree that it may have been vandalized.
- As usual, too many words.
- Thank you for your prompt replacement of your container door lock at our shipyard.
- We are sorry that it was recently found broken and agree that it may have been vandalized.
- However, we haven't found any other signs of vandalism in the yard, nor have we been informed of any other property damage or loss.
- We cannot report the case to the police, but we will enhance our security by requiring all visitors to register, closely monitor the yard, and make other necessary improvements in the near future.
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As usual, too many words.
Thank you for your prompt replacement of your container door lock at our shipyard. We are sorry that it was recently found broken and agree that it may have been vandalized. However, we haven't found any other signs of vandalism in the yard, nor have we been informed of any other property damage or loss.
We cannot report the case to the police, b
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