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Chowbarry Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me correct the following e-mail. Thank you.
Please help me correct the following e-mail. Thank you.
Dear Peter,
With reference to the following chain of e-mails and our recent venue inspection, most of rectification works on the facilities at our playground committed by your office are still found unfinished. As the course of the rectification works have dragged on more than half a year, please step up your efforts to finalize the work by the end of this month to ensure playground safety. Please also let us know immediately if there are any difficulties in carrying out the works arise.
Yours sincerely,
Keith
Dear Peter,
With reference to the following chain of e-mails and our recent venue inspection, most of rectification works on the facilities at our playground committed by your office are still found unfinished. As the course of the rectification works have dragged on more than half a year, please step up your efforts to finalize the work by the end of this month to ensure playground safety. Please also let us know immediately if there are any difficulties in carrying out the works arise.
Yours sincerely,
Keith
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) by your office are (or is if you use work ) still found unfinished. As the course of the rectification works (or work ) have has (refers to course , singular) dragged on more than half a year, please step up your efforts to finalize the work by the end of this month to ensure playground safety. Please also let us know immediately if there are any difficulties in carrying out the works arise ( You can't use both there are and arise here.
- ) by your office are (or is if you use work ) still found unfinished.
- As the course of the rectification works (or work ) have has (refers to course , singular) dragged on more than half a year, please step up your efforts to finalize the work by the end of this month to ensure playground safety.
- Please also let us know immediately if there are any difficulties in carrying out the works arise ( You can't use both there are and arise here.
- You can say Please also let us know immediately if there are any difficulties in carrying out the works or Please also let us know immediately if any difficulties in carrying out the works arise ) .
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With reference to the following chain of e-mails and our recent venue inspection, most of the rectification works (You could make works singular throughout, with corresponding verb changes) on the facilities at our playground committed (did you mean being ca
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