Please help me correct Task 1 IELTS

These two tables illustrate the result of survey of number of visitors’ resaon from UK who travel abroad and also the portotion of destinations of visits abroad by UK from 1994 to 1998.

Overall, it is clear to be seen that the main purpose of travelling abroad among UK residents was for leisure reason, meanwhile the number of British people going overseas for unmentioned reasons was the lowest. It is also obvious from the second table that Western Europe was the most favourable destination among the three surveyed regions.

In 1994, there were more than 15,000 Britsh people traveling abroad for holiday, around five times higher than the number of people touring for business in the same year. This figure droped slightly by 350 people after one year before experiencing a moderate increase to nearly 30,000 during the next three years. Meantime, the same pattern can be seen in the reason of traveling for families and relatives. This number paltry decreased by 60 people in 1995 and then witnessed a steady growth to more than 3,000 people in the last year. Besides, residents travelling to a foreign country for work in the UK rose moderately by nearly 1,000 people while the figure for those going for unspecified reasons almost remained unchanged throughout the time frame, at around 1,000 travellers.

In addition, standing at 19,371 people in 1994, the number of UK visitors to Western Europe showed an insignificant decreased to 18,944 people one year later before increasing again to over 25,000 people in the last year. Following the same trend, the number of British travellers to North America and other areas dropped in 1995, and finally experiencing a growth to 1,823 and 2,486 people respectively.