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The first chart shows the change in divorce and marriage rates in America, and the second chart shows marital status of American adults between 1970 and 2000.
It is clear that there was a decline in American marriages over the period shown. the majority of adults in the USA were married, but the percentage of single adult people was higher in 2000.
In 1970, there were 2.5 million married people and 1 million divorces. The percentage of marriage remained in 1980, but dip to 2 million people in 2000. In contrast, the divorce rate peaked in 1980, at nearly 1.5 million people, before falling to 1 million at the of the period.
Around 70% of America adults set up a family in 1970. However, this figure drop to under 60% in 2000. On the other hand, from 1970 to 2000, the proportion of adults who are unmarried and divorced rose by approximately 10% in total. the rate of widowed Americans fell slightly in 2000.
I am wander whether the phrase "70% of America adults set up a family in 1970" I used here is right or not. please get me out, if anything goes wrong, give me some suggestion if you can
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I don't see a chart, so it is difficult to help you. I have highlighted the grammatical errors. The first chart shows the change in divorce and marriage rates in America, and the second chart shows (missing word) marital status of American adults between 1970 and 2000.
- I don't see a chart, so it is difficult to help you.
- I have highlighted the grammatical errors.
- The first chart shows the change in divorce and marriage rates in America, and the second chart shows (missing word) marital status of American adults between 1970 and 2000.
- It is clear that there was a decline in American marriages over the period shown.
- t he majority of adults in the USA were married, but the percentage of single adult people was higher in 2000.
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I don't see a chart, so it is difficult to help you. I have highlighted the grammatical errors.
The first chart shows the change in divorce and marriage rates in America, and the second chart shows (missing word) marital status of American adults between 1970 and 2000.
It is clear that there was a decline in American marriages over the period shown.
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