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The graph shows the changes in possesses of cars in Great Britain between 1971 - 2007

Overall, the total number of households with one or more car rose considerably. In particular, a significant increase was seen in two-car households

In 1971, almost half of British families did not have regular use of a car. Around 44% was the proportion of households with one car, but the figure for two-car households was almost 8%. It was uncommon to own three or more cars at that time.

The number of one-car households was the highest from the late 1970s onwards, though we could see little changes. the proportion of households with no car fell steadily over 36-year period to around 25% in 2007. In contrast, households with two cars rose steadily reaching approximately 27& in 2007. the figure for households with three ore more cars increased by nearly 5%

  

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n The graph shows the changes I cannot see the graph, so can only comment on your grammar. The text with yellow highlight has mistakes. The graph shows the changes in possesses of cars in Great Britain between 1971 - 200 7 Overall, the total number of households with one or more car rose considerably.

  • n The graph shows the changes I cannot see the graph, so can only comment on your grammar.
  • The text with yellow highlight has mistakes.
  • The graph shows the changes in possesses of cars in Great Britain between 1971 - 200 7 Overall, the total number of households with one or more car rose considerably.
  • In particular, a significant increase was seen in two-car household s In 1971, almost half of British families did not have regular use of a car.
  • Around 44% was the proportion of households with one car, but the figure for two-car households was almost 8%.
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Lê Van Ti?nThe graph shows the changes

I cannot see the graph, so can only comment on your grammar. The text with yellow highlight has mistakes.




The graph shows the changes in possesses of cars in Great Britain between 1971 - 2007

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