PLEASE! Help Me correct my statement of motivation!

Hi! help me correct my statement of motivation for a course in germany!
Every reply will be important and will be on consideration!
THANKS!


When I graduated from high school, I was looking for an innovative career in which people’s health would be the main subject of matter. The need of professionals in charge of medical equipment, clinical management, and patient safety in Costa Rica is a reality. These issues called my attention; therefore I decided to study Biomedical Engineering.

Since that moment in my life, biomedical engineering has been part of my everyday work. As I got more involved in my career, I realized that being immersed in a technological field on a developing country represents dedication, organization and by all means an attitude of seeking for more. That is why in 2003 I decided to begin another professional career called “Imagenología Diagnóstica y Terapéutica” (diagnostic and therapeutic medical imaging). The interrelationship/togetherness of both careers has given me a wider view of the Costa Rican health care system, and day by day I have experienced once more the need of new professionals with innovative ideas for the benefit of my country.

Studying two professional careers has been a challenge not only because of the academic demand but also because of the schedule arrangements that I have to do along the way. For these reasons my studying experience is taking a little longer than usual. Instead of this being a problem, it has helped me to become more mature, grow as a person and as a future professional.

Studying to become a biomedical engineer on a developing nation forces myself into continuous research education. This implies I have to keep myself updated in the latest innovations, both technological and in knowledge. Only by this way I will attain useful tools to make a contribution and satisfy my professional needs. My participation in the intensive course is part of my personal purpose mainly because of the experience I will gain that will allow me to make an input in my professional field.

Furthermore, another reason that motivates me to participate in the course is the intercultural exchange I will encounter there. The experience of interacting with people from different cultures makes us question our points of view and allows for interesting debates.

Attending the intensive course “Biomedical Engineering in a European Perspective” will open my mind to new ideas, wider thoughts and different outlooks in my career. Being chosen for this scholarship will not only be a motivation to continue pursuing my goals, but will also allow me engage myself in a challenging academic experience that will give me tools to improve the biomedical field in my country, Costa Rica.