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Grammarisnessary Posted 6 years ago
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Please Help Me Correct my Run Off Sentences

The funniest incident that happened to me was when I was getting a hair cut. I sneezed, and my mother accidentally cut off my sideburns. I remember the expression on my face when I saw I had no sideburns I wanted to cry. My mother had to cut all my hair off I was bald, my mother, and I laughed a lot about the incident, then I went to put a hat on. It will always be in my memories sometimes when I brush my hair, I remember that incident, and I just laugh because it was hilarious.


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